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All about what I did in the holidays.

On the 1st of October,  Jemma wanted to take Blake and I to Timezone and the Warehouse. And Jemma wanted herself, Blake and I  to do fun things with her.

When I went to Timezone Blake and I played basketball and squirting the ducklings and they were only toy ones. And then after squirting the ducklings, went to the Warehouse and got to spend 5 dollars each, and I bought Gel-Pens.

When I got the gel pens, some of them were sparkly, and most of them weren’t. After getting Gel Pens, we got some jelly-beans for Blake, and a hot wheels car, and then Blake and I got to choose two or three DVDs, and the name of them were ( chum chum heroes ) and ( Despicable Me 3 ).

Then after the Warehouse we had McDonald's for lunch, and instead of the blackcurrant drink we got a frozen coke, and when we got our McDonald's for  lunch we went home and ate it.

We only wanted a happy meal, the toy we got was a pug, and Blake got the same thing.

 And then we walked to drop off Blake, at Preschool, And some little kids wanted to come, was Sophia, Ella, Jemma and Me, when we got there we played tag, after tag heaps of little kids that I didn’t even know followed Me, and even when we were leaving they followed us is well because they like Sophia and I.

Why we went out to do fun things was because Jemma wanted to take Blake and I out to timezone McDonald's and to walk  Blake to Preschool and the warehouse.

When we dropped Blake off we walked back because we walked to drop Blake at Preschool.

he walking under a little bridge we went near too he loved going under the bridge because he thought it was the trolls bridge.

We is nearly 4 years old but hes only three his birthday is in November the 27th he is very tall for a three year old boy.

We had so much fun with Jemma taking Blake and I out to timezone and the warehouse to buy things but at timezone to play some games.

When we did those things we did it on the 1st Of October and That was in the holidays.