RECOUNT

My First Draft

Orientation:

All about what I did in the holidays.

On the 1st of October,  Jemma wanted to take Blake and I to Timezone and the Warehouse. And Jemma wanted herself, Blake and I  to do fun things with her.

When I went to Timezone Blake and I played basketball and squirting the ducklings and they were only toy ones. And then after squirting the ducklings, went to the Warehouse and got to spend 5 dollars each, and I bought Gel-Pens.

When I got the gel pens, some of them were sparkly, and most of them weren’t. After getting Gel Pens, we got some jelly-beans for Blake, and a hot wheels car, and then Blake and I got to choose two or three DVDs, and the name of them were ( chum chum heroes ) and ( Despicable Me 3 ).

Then after the Warehouse we had McDonald's for lunch, and instead of the blackcurrant drink we got a frozen coke, and when we got our McDonald's for  lunch we went home and ate it.

We only wanted a happy meal, the toy we got was a pug, and Blake got the same thing.

 And then we walked to drop off Blake, at Preschool, And some little kids wanted to come, was Sophia, Ella, Jemma and Me, when we got there we played tag, after tag heaps of little kids that I didn’t even know followed Me, and even when we were leaving they followed us is well because they like Sophia and I.

Why we went out to do fun things was because Jemma wanted to take Blake and I out to timezone McDonald's and to walk  Blake to Preschool and the warehouse.

When we dropped Blake off we walked back because we walked to drop Blake at Preschool.

he walking under a little bridge we went near too he loved going under the bridge because he thought it was the trolls bridge.

We is nearly 4 years old but hes only three his birthday is in November the 27th he is very tall for a three year old boy.

We had so much fun with Jemma taking Blake and I out to timezone and the warehouse to buy things but at timezone to play some games.

When we did those things we did it on the 1st Of October and That was in the holidays.

tehyas birthday

this is a photo of Tehya's birthday cake and her she let Mrs Mclachlan take a picture so I choose to copy the picture and put it on my blog.
she is gone to chumley for her dads operation shes my best friend I have.
this was when her birthday happened.

kiwi animal adaptation fact kiwi beak.

I'm writing facts about the kiwis head and beak.

fact about the kiwis head and beak

Facts: 

Kiwis beak is good for digging and smelling far away things like dogs.

kiwis can smell very welly.

kiwis are very good at smelling because they can move underground.

they can smell underground.

Instead, smell may be mainly used to explore their environment.

As kiwis move they tap the ground with It's beak.

kiwis are very fasts that people can'r even catch them.

Leopsablecanddart

                                   Leopsablecanddart

      

Habitat: in the country

Diet: He eats grass antelopes and dare’s and snake and a zebra,,,

Meat,dry grass,green grass, and dry wet grass,snow,bark from a tree,drink water,eat wild dog’s like from araner-park.,stones Carnivore. Insects.Predators and Threats

Brown trout, and humans.

Head:    

The head is a cheetah and on the cheetah there is some spot’s and colour the colour is skin colour. The cheetah run very fast and sometimes slow because it walks and when it’s not walking.

Leg’s: Sable- Antelope leg’s

Body: cheetah head and candy darter legs and fish swimming tail.And there are two baby cheetah.

Important things: also known as the finescale saddled darter,males during spawning season. Their habitat is small, cool and warm streams with the adults usually in the fastest flowing water.

abbagale's G2 Metaphors and Similes in Songs

W.A.L.T: understand the messages of metaphors and similes.

The lions Awesomest Day in his life sqence.

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?

                                         

                                        Second Draft

Improvements in red.

The lions Awesomest Day in his life

It was a very hot day in December. I was sunbathing, in the sun and we saw a whole herd of buffalos, coming along the “ Savannah in Africa ” desert. At the start I started chasing the little buffalo, because it was, to weak and very slow, like it couldn’t, run or it hurt itself, and it couldn’t run, that fast like some, of the other bigger, buffalos and lions. I had lost my yummiest lunch, in the history.

I had enough of chasing the little buffalo, because we were tired, and sleepy, like we could just full asleep, on the desert of Savannah in Africa, and not wake up, it’s nighttime.,we might not have to wake up in savannah,in africa because it’s going, to turn nighttime and it might ,turn dark but I’m still too, tired to wake up. Because we are very sleepy.

We took the baby buffalo to the pond, and we were chewing it for our feast for dinner, and it didn’t want to die it was still, alive at the time that we took, it and we dug our  claws, in it’s body and then the, crocodile came and we played lion and crocodiles war of fighting, we didn’t share the baby buffalo, because it was our feast for dinner, and we were starving to eat him all up.

But we couldn’t eat, it because the herd of buffalos,came and saw us, they were near and they scared, us away from chewing, on the baby buffalo, and it didn’t die it got, away because the huge buffalo’s, came to save their little baby buffalo.

Some of the lion stayed, and the rest left because, they didn’t want to get hurt.

 And we played tug a war with him, we were trying to, chew him all up so  we can have our dinner, and then we  chopped him up,and eat him all up, because we were hungry, at the time that you caught him, we were ready to eat him up for dinner.

But then his parents came and got him, to take him home and leave, him there.

Self comment: That would of been, a yummy dinner if, his parent didn’t come and save him, and they, “called the baby buffalo to tell him get over here!!!

Self Comment: The part that I like is when I said the baby buffalo was for our feast for dinner.

Animal presentation slide

W.A.L.T: read information about animals and find the key facts.

reading activity

Abbagale Animal Groups

Aim: By Thursday you need to decide what animal group you would like to join for literacy with Mrs Mclachlan.

So what group would YOU like to join and become an expert in???

Sea  Mammals        Mammals         Reptiles         Birds

                                                                                                

First let’s find out a little more. Can you find out what these words mean?

Check out these links to help you:

                         

Word	Meaning - describe these groups
Vertebrates	They have backbones.
Invertebrates	Invertebrates don’t have backbones, vertebrates have bones.
Mammals	Mammals  drink milk specially because they need to drink milk so they don’t die too fast,
Sea Mammals	Animals that don’t have any fir like fish dolphins and whales And jelly-fish.
Birds	They are born hard like reptile’s. They shelled the egg’s.
Reptiles	They have Scaly Skin and it is hard like Plastic.They are Born on Land. They are a cold blooded Animal.
Amphibians	They are born in water and they breath with heaps of gill’s.
Arthropods	Arthropods is a huge phylum of animals because

The lions calf muck up day (draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened?

The   lions   calf    muck  up   day

One Sunny day the buffalos were walking through the desert, just walking along the dry grass. Me the  lion I felt happy when I attack the calf and chased it because it’s really weak and slow that is why I chased the baby buffalo. And because, the baby buffalo was very slow and then the bigger ones came and chased us away, and they tried to put their horns and try to hook us up and swing us away, so we ran off so we don’t get hurt. Before we went and started, we walk off to go home,and leave the buffalos alone, and be happy ever after.

I was sunbathing in the sun and we, saw a whole herd of buffalos came along the desert, at I started chasing the little baby buffalo, because it was very  weak and slow.

I had a noth of chasing the little buffalo, we took it and started taking the baby buffalo to the pond, and we were biting it it didn’t die it was still, alive and then the,crocodile came and we played tug of war, we didn’t share the little buffalo because it was our feast for dinner. But we couldn’t  eat it because the bigger buffalos were near they scared, us away from eating the buffalo it didn’t die it got , away, because the huge big buffalos came towards us we ran and some stayed like three stayed and the rest left some they, don’t get swung up in the air and die we don’t want, to die because we could be faster than the buffalos, can run 10km and hour. lions can run 1000kms and hour not, not buffalos.