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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 23, 2018

Yurtle The Turtle

Hi We now have the turtle named Yurtle in our classroom. We got them because it was our turn to have them so we also gave them the 2 frogs that we had named Yoda, and Bell they were amazing they made these weird noises. We gave these letters to Mrs Mitchell at St Bernadette´s school... Our letters had to explain why we should have Yurtle... Some people said because the children in your class would love the sound they make. It sounded like they were farting but they were calling out to each other... The turtle named Yurtle also had red ears. but she didnt say yes straight away we had to give her a good reason why  we should have Yurtle.
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Monday, September 24, 2018

A strange thing happened on the way to school

Here is my draft work...

A strange thing happened on the way to school:
One day on the way to school this strange thing happened. There was this old man who was following me from around Buchanan's Road all the way to school, I felt scared as a brick. When i keep looking behind me, he was getting closer, and closer I was wondering why he was following that far.

As I was on waterloo road he started to ask me these random questions, he wanted to know where I lived but, I didn’t want to tell him anything, because I didn’t know who the man was. Than I thought I had seen him on TV. I did he was from the other side of the world, and I also knew what his name was, his name was called Donald Trump from the united states of America I think.

Then he asked what school do you go to, I said why do you want to know that. He said because i wanted to know how good the school was. Firstly he didn’t even ask if the school was good, I thought what is he doing, when he speaks he is not making any sense.

Then I ran away from him because I felt so scared that I nearly exploded, and Bursted out with blood from my head. When I got to school I finally saw that he had gone. So I said (phew) then I had a happy rest of the day at school. Also I thought what could happen to me after school since what he done to me on the way to school.

Here is my final work that was my draft that I made more better and hopefully you enjoy my story...

One day on the way to school this strange thing happened. There was a old man who was following me all around Buchanan's Road, all the way to school, I felt scared as a brick. When I keep looking behind me, he was getting closer and closer, I was wondering why he was following me to school.

When I was on waterloo road, The old man started to ask me random questions, he wanted to know where I lived but, I didn’t want to tell him private information, because I didn’t know who he was he also looked hideous. Then I had thought I seen him on TV. I did he was from the United States of America, and I also knew what his name was, his name is Donald Trump.

I got annoyed when he kept on asking questions I didn’t know what to do about it. I thought what is he going to do, when he speaks he doesn’t make any sense. I think he doesn’t make sense because he’s a old fat chubby man.

Then I ran so fast he couldn’t catch me because of his old age and I nearly exploded because of how scared I was, and he did want to stop chasing after me but one thing when he stopped asking questions. All he wanted to know was how good my school was. When I finally made it I felt happy because he didn’t want to kidnap me he wanted to visit my school. He only followed so he could find his way to HHS.

Also HHS stands for Hornby high school hope I made more sense for my writing. Thanks for reading!...

Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Hi Here is a presentation of a Cinquain Poetry and my presentation is all about puppies. What we have to do is the title my. Title Is (Puppies). The second row down is about it like is is cute/cuddly. The third row down is what could they be doing right now walking running caring eating playing or barking, and the last two could be a sentence and a word for the last line. hope you enjoyed. good bye have a great day.

 
If you enjoyed plz post a comment or question that are helpflu thought positive or something nice.

Friday, October 27, 2017

Pigeon Impossible

Once upon a time there was a man dressed up in a black suit. He Was looking everywhere, when he was crossing the road, he was Walking backwards ,and forwards because there was cars coming When he could’ve just waited until they were gone.

But when he was Crossing the road cars just about ran him over, because of his walking On the road. it was very dangerous he could’ve killed himself.

After he had sat down, a pigeon appeared beside him. Then he Was trying to shoo it away, but all the pigeon wanted was a Donut. But the spy guy said no.

But in the end he threw a piece of the Donut to the ground, so The pigeon impossible could eat it. But it didn’t want the small piece, it wanted the whole thing.

I looked at the Donut, the pigeon flew all around me. I threw the Donut across the chair. He went to get it but the pigeon impossible fell in my case.

The bird was pressing thing’s like he had never touch a button before. One of the buttons opened the machine guns, and started to shoot everyone, when it blasted off into the air.

Then after when the spy person was holding the donut, he was going to put it into the burning red fired car but he didn’t. Then the pigeon Stop it, and the machine guns got put away, and then he flew onto the ground.

Because he really wanted the rocket case back, then the pigeon opened up the case. Because he felt hungry after all.

Then the spy man tried giving it to him because he was trying to get his privacy case back, but then the pigeon closed it up with himself in it, and got the machine guns back out.

Then the spy man did it again put the donuts just about into the fire. So the pigeon opened it again and the spy man got his case. So he gave the donuts to the pigeon.

The End

Hope you enjoyed my pigeon impossible story Spy Man, and Pigeon


Friday, July 7, 2017

Borax Liquid Starch Slime

One of my favourite thing to do and never stop doing would be to make and play with slime because of how fun it is. But one thing I really want to do everyday at school is make glow in the dark slime with everyone in my classroom number 10 hope you enjoy my presentation that I have made for the whole world too see.
if you like it plz only write a comment if you like it
starch slime presentation


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Friday, June 16, 2017

M&M's and Water



Welcome to my slideshow hope you enjoy my work have made from science. when we were trying to see if all of the M&M's would float some of them had sunken because Miss Lee said the ones that had nuts in them were the ones that would sink because they are too big and heavy.
#Hope you enjoy# thanx for watching, hope you liked it...

High Diving Giraffes

One day when I was walking down the spooky narrow hallway then I saw this camera, and I pulled a funny face at the camera.

Because I want to know if it was working. And then a security guard nearly came out to see what was going on, so what we started was a racket to see if we actually made the security guard angry.

But then he came out and said get out of here this not for giraffes it is for people to swim for swimming lessons. So we went to have some swimming lessons.

So we all proved what we all were having lessons of how to swim, and then the Security Guard said wow look at all of you’s having some awesome swimming lessons.

When we all did some swimming lessons we also had turns at hanging upside down from the roof because some of us had blood rush and then some of us nearly passed out because of hanging upside down for too long.

Then after our swimming lessons the security guard had kicked us out because of the spitting and the face pulling at the camera. He looked so freaky like he was thin wide and hair all over his body even hair was coming out of his clothes.

And I felt so nervous about what he was going to be doing about the noise of racket we were all doing as a team…

The end

Friday, May 5, 2017

Adventures in the pit



When I had got up to the slide, I felt so nervous. My face was as red as fire. Mum said where are you, I am getting ready to race all the way to the bottom of the slide. But it was so scary at first. I said mum look there is this spooky thing looking Me. help Mum help.. Then my face felt  so sweaty as a bucket full of slime.
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When I was in the pit. I tried counting all of the balls, there was to many, I thought there might of been like 1 billion of them because, everywhere I looked they were everywhere. Then I started to fall even further in the pit.
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Then I face planted on piles of balls. They felt  rock hard ... then my face had bird poop splattered every single spot on my face, then I stood up, and I had nearly fell of the edge of the ball mountain. I look behind me I was so scared because it was so spooky like a ghost was stalking Me.
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Then I jumped onto the climbing wall, and to the other. Next minute I saw a lollipop All-ll!!!! lollipop yummy I will just use that to climb, because it looks like something grippy. Up I go.
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Yay,  I got out, Mum I had the best day ever exploring the open pit day, it was spooky, and pitch black darkness. Maybe one day you could come exploring with me Mum… she said maybe one day!!!
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I said to Mum, when I was in the pit a gynormous lollipop got stuck on my face, and I could get it off. It felt like it was stuck on my face like super glue.
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By Abbagale




Friday, April 7, 2017

The Cloud... rainbow sunshine

07/04/2017
The cloud story
Today...
Hello my name is rainbow sunshine.
Today I am on a mission for around london, I will be wondering off round this world, to see what is going on 2017...

1 week later.
I went to these colourful traffic lights. When I went in front of them, my body turned rainbow in the middle.   In the people's mind, I thought they might of been thinking of wow, and fabulous, thats not fear you can turn rainbow in the middle...

2 weeks later
When I was moving along, There became a bit of breeze, then it got stronger, and stronger.   Then I thought it might be able to talk, but it couldn’t because it was only weather forecast for which was windy weather and it made it freezing like, and ice cube.

5 weeks later
When I became an old cloud, I was only like 8 years of age, then apparently my parents came looking in for me, as soon as it turned 9 o’clock because I was not mean’t to leave my family from cloud to sneakily out of my mind...

5 weeks and a half later
When I was wondering round, I thought of what could I do next, I think I have done everything I have thought of. I am getting quite bored here doing nothing, like looking at people watching, what they are doing around their crazy minds.

6 weeks later
I know what I could do now, I will go and ask people if they would like to feel me, because I reckon That I feel like candy floss, that came straight from a floss machine with goodness in it.

7 weeks and a half later
I now know what I could do, I could go and have a slit walk around the city of london, and have a sneak peek. Then see what is going on in world, When  I finished my incredible walk...

8 weeks later
Ohh!!! No I found a fire in someone's backyard, time to call the firebergaid, Ohh year I just remember, I can’t pick up phones otherwise It will go through my body, even know I can’t touch it anyway. One thing, I will make it rain then somehow the fire will go out...

8 and a half weeks later
Time to put out the fire don’t worry about it, it will be out in no time today ,only a couple of minute, which is 2 minutes I think. Thank goodness people aren’t moaning about that I will be putting the fire out in no time, I will be impressed that people will thank me, for celebrating about the fire.

That means they appreciate the help with putting the fire out, with a little bit of water.  
One part of my exploring, I was confused because I don’t know how someone had made their land and house building magically go on fire so fast, and badly.


10 weeks later
I’m so confused, because When I was putting out the fire. For some reason the firefighters was putting it out too. with their fire hoses I got so scared when they looked at me, because I didn’t know what they were going to say about Me.

The end

Tuesday, October 25, 2016

RECOUNT



My First Draft

Orientation:

All about what I did in the holidays.

On the 1st of October,  Jemma wanted to take Blake and I to Timezone and the Warehouse. And Jemma wanted herself, Blake and I  to do fun things with her.

When I went to Timezone Blake and I played basketball and squirting the ducklings and they were only toy ones. And then after squirting the ducklings, went to the Warehouse and got to spend 5 dollars each, and I bought Gel-Pens.

When I got the gel pens, some of them were sparkly, and most of them weren’t. After getting Gel Pens, we got some jelly-beans for Blake, and a hot wheels car, and then Blake and I got to choose two or three DVDs, and the name of them were ( chum chum heroes ) and ( Despicable Me 3 ).

Then after the Warehouse we had McDonald's for lunch, and instead of the blackcurrant drink we got a frozen coke, and when we got our McDonald's for  lunch we went home and ate it.

We only wanted a happy meal, the toy we got was a pug, and Blake got the same thing.

 And then we walked to drop off Blake, at Preschool, And some little kids wanted to come, was Sophia, Ella, Jemma and Me, when we got there we played tag, after tag heaps of little kids that I didn’t even know followed Me, and even when we were leaving they followed us is well because they like Sophia and I.

Why we went out to do fun things was because Jemma wanted to take Blake and I out to timezone McDonald's and to walk  Blake to Preschool and the warehouse.

When we dropped Blake off we walked back because we walked to drop Blake at Preschool.
he walking under a little bridge we went near too he loved going under the bridge because he thought it was the trolls bridge.

We is nearly 4 years old but hes only three his birthday is in November the 27th he is very tall for a three year old boy.

We had so much fun with Jemma taking Blake and I out to timezone and the warehouse to buy things but at timezone to play some games.

When we did those things we did it on the 1st Of October and That was in the holidays.

Friday, September 9, 2016

space the bravest chimp in history

W.A.L.T: Write A Narrative


this is what my group has been working on for 6 weeks now and this is my work that I've done for 6 weeks Im very proud of my work because of how much I have done I have done 7 pages of writing on a docs and a slides.
hope you leave a postive comment thoughtful comment and helpful comment if you do you are the best thanks for if you leave a very nice I like the people that comment on my work bye bye..see you later .