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Friday, May 5, 2017

Adventures in the pit



When I had got up to the slide, I felt so nervous. My face was as red as fire. Mum said where are you, I am getting ready to race all the way to the bottom of the slide. But it was so scary at first. I said mum look there is this spooky thing looking Me. help Mum help.. Then my face felt  so sweaty as a bucket full of slime.
jh
When I was in the pit. I tried counting all of the balls, there was to many, I thought there might of been like 1 billion of them because, everywhere I looked they were everywhere. Then I started to fall even further in the pit.
kj
Then I face planted on piles of balls. They felt  rock hard ... then my face had bird poop splattered every single spot on my face, then I stood up, and I had nearly fell of the edge of the ball mountain. I look behind me I was so scared because it was so spooky like a ghost was stalking Me.
m
Then I jumped onto the climbing wall, and to the other. Next minute I saw a lollipop All-ll!!!! lollipop yummy I will just use that to climb, because it looks like something grippy. Up I go.
kj
Yay,  I got out, Mum I had the best day ever exploring the open pit day, it was spooky, and pitch black darkness. Maybe one day you could come exploring with me Mum… she said maybe one day!!!
jg
I said to Mum, when I was in the pit a gynormous lollipop got stuck on my face, and I could get it off. It felt like it was stuck on my face like super glue.
jjjj
By Abbagale




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