A strange thing happened on the way to school

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A strange thing happened on the way to school:

One day on the way to school this strange thing happened. There was this old man who was following me from around Buchanan's Road all the way to school, I felt scared as a brick. When i keep looking behind me, he was getting closer, and closer I was wondering why he was following that far.

As I was on waterloo road he started to ask me these random questions, he wanted to know where I lived but, I didn’t want to tell him anything, because I didn’t know who the man was. Than I thought I had seen him on TV. I did he was from the other side of the world, and I also knew what his name was, his name was called Donald Trump from the united states of America I think.

Then he asked what school do you go to, I said why do you want to know that. He said because i wanted to know how good the school was. Firstly he didn’t even ask if the school was good, I thought what is he doing, when he speaks he is not making any sense.

Then I ran away from him because I felt so scared that I nearly exploded, and Bursted out with blood from my head. When I got to school I finally saw that he had gone. So I said (phew) then I had a happy rest of the day at school. Also I thought what could happen to me after school since what he done to me on the way to school.

Here is my final work that was my draft that I made more better and hopefully you enjoy my story...

One day on the way to school this strange thing happened. There was a old man who was following me all around Buchanan's Road, all the way to school, I felt scared as a brick. When I keep looking behind me, he was getting closer and closer, I was wondering why he was following me to school.

When I was on waterloo road, The old man started to ask me random questions, he wanted to know where I lived but, I didn’t want to tell him private information, because I didn’t know who he was he also looked hideous. Then I had thought I seen him on TV. I did he was from the United States of America, and I also knew what his name was, his name is Donald Trump.

I got annoyed when he kept on asking questions I didn’t know what to do about it. I thought what is he going to do, when he speaks he doesn’t make any sense. I think he doesn’t make sense because he’s a old fat chubby man.

Then I ran so fast he couldn’t catch me because of his old age and I nearly exploded because of how scared I was, and he did want to stop chasing after me but one thing when he stopped asking questions. All he wanted to know was how good my school was. When I finally made it I felt happy because he didn’t want to kidnap me he wanted to visit my school. He only followed so he could find his way to HHS.

Also HHS stands for Hornby high school hope I made more sense for my writing. Thanks for reading!...