Top Left:
The black tress twist into the mist
Top Right:
Branches scattered everywhere through the crunchy leaves
Bottom:
The water looks as dark as coal with a reflect of trees from the land
3 Sentences:
- The path of autumn walks down into the white mist.
The cold Weather has sat on the scattered crackling sticks on the dirty
Character: Donald
Destination: School
Reason Wanting To Go There: to get a education, see friends, have someone other children to hang and play with
Was The Journey worth it: was worth it so i could get a good education and see some cool friends so i wasn't bored alone at home, and taking risk to enjoy life before it ends
problem: Broken Wobbly Tearing Apart Bridge
Today in this journey of finding my way to school, I had to first crossed this bridge that was tearing to pieces day by day. Each day I went on the bridge to get to school 1 piece of the bridge would wobble off as the wind blew. It was hard most of the time to get pass from on the bridge because of how shaky it was and how unstable it was. It took me almost a hour just to get off the bridge because I was afraid, But to solve my problem of getting off the bridge I was just thinking of the positive side to it which was being able to get to school to do some learning and get a education also to see my terrific friends. After School I had again to try and cross this tearing bridge and it would just sway and sway in the wind as i go across it. It was the hardiest part of the day going after school to cross this bridge, But I had to do it and sooner or later it went past my fears and i just stay positive to figure out the easiest way to get across it. So that was my |Journey To School|
I’m loving your writing Abbagayle. The words you have used really make me feel as though I’m on the journey with you.
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Aw awesome! I didnt choose the picture as it was part of my english work, and was one of the pictures i had to use or just used it.
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