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Friday, July 2, 2021

Creative Writing - Inside A Bag

                       


To start my day off by waking up, I opened my eyes wide and all I saw was completely

nothing because it was pitch black of darkness. I also started hearing these noises around

the city and had random thoughts in my mind. When I was breathing all I could breathe

in was hot stuffy air as if I was trapped in a small space, But I found out I was in this bag

the size of me moving across this bag transferrer. I began to worry as I had never woken

up like this before, I began to think of how to get out as the zipper was on the outside of

the bag, I couldn't do anything about it. After I felt as if I was struggling to breathe I yelled

and screeched for help but nobody heard me. Then I feel something is scanning me and I

then realized I was going to go on a trip somewhere but had no clue where I was going,

I thought of ideas for how to escape the bag I was in, I tried ripping mini holes the size of

my finger but it was the hardest to do, Yet I still tried to do it. I then after figuring out that

wasn’t working I tried to push the zip from the inside of the bag to the other end but it

wasn't as easy as I thought it would be. I was breathing deeply as the thought of worry

that I couldn’t get out, I also never knew what could have happened to me if I never knew

how to get out. I tried yelping like a dog, not 1 person heard me whatsoever. I just to try

to make my mind not blank as the morning I woke up I couldn’t remember anything at all

as like I was knocked out cold,  I rubbed my head and twinkled my toes, as a spark thought

came to mind, but sadly wasn’t a memory of what happened to me this morning. I sighed to

myself and finally, someone randomly heard my sighing and I got happy and was like could

I please have some help and they said sorry sir I cannot help you and you are part of this bag

and are being traveled around the world. I got told to slow down with my speeds because I

spoke fast with horrible thoughts for where I'm going. I begged and begged them but they

still wouldn’t give me help to get out. I counted down - 3.2.1 and tried bursting my way out

of the bag from lying down, it almost worked but I got a really bad pain in my body. Then

wondered what I can do…    In the time of 1 hr, I felt spooked out because I felt feelings of

wind passing through me as if it was a ghost. I was just hearing noises of ghosts, but I thought

my mind was playing with me as if I was in dreamy land.





2 comments:

  1. Well done Abbagale this is well written keep up the great work and enjoy writing while you can have fun.
    From Tamara (Tam'z)

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    1. Thanks bestfriend x , I really appreciate your comment made by day to see more positive comments on my blog. You keep up your great work is well

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