Here is another slideshow I have done so far for my health I've put heaps of effort into it and I finally finished it hope you like my presentation. Please leave a comment. If you feeling anxious don't worry everything will be ok just listen to music maybe and try relax and forget about what has happened to make you feel that way.
Abbagale this is brilliant work! It is obvious that you are really interested in this subject and we can see how much effort you have put in. I really like you choice of pictures to illustrate your ideas. It is good to see you using labels as well. Have you thought about how you might be able to add a catchy title to help draw people in to reading the work? You mioght even be able to start with a question to engage the reader?
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Mark
Thanks mark appreicated heaps. I never thought to add a question and idk what type of title to do.
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ReplyDeleteAnother quality blog post about health. I really liked your first slide, because I think this really shows how people feel when they suffer from anxiety. You've also got some great statistics here to support your comments (although you did double up on your data on slide 4. Also, perhaps you should state what the source of your data is.
I seriously think you have a real talent for this work. Have you ever given any serious thought about doing some study about this when you leave school?
There are a number of professions related to mental health and wellbeing:
- nurse
- psychologist
- social worker
- school counsellor
As for a catchy title, what about one of these:
- Anxiety - Beyond Being Worried
- Anxiety - More Than a Fleeting Concern
I like the second one best, because it has two meanings:
(1) that normal anxiety is called fleeting (as you mentioned in your slides)
(2) that the number of people who suffer from anxiety is a big concern.
What do you think?
- Mr Mitchell
yeah its really good ay mr mitchell,
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