I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Abbagale Great job with the card, this is another good example of your skills in drawing. You must have spent a lot of time on this, and I'm sure your Nana will really appreciate it. It's a shame that we can't read what you have written - perhaps you might like to add the message to the blog post, along with a photo of the front cover. - Mr Mitchell
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Nice work Abbagale! She will love this!
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Thank you mark and she did love it.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job with the card, this is another good example of your skills in drawing. You must have spent a lot of time on this, and I'm sure your Nana will really appreciate it. It's a shame that we can't read what you have written - perhaps you might like to add the message to the blog post, along with a photo of the front cover.
- Mr Mitchell
i already gave it to her, when it was her bday. like 3 or 2 days ago. but thanks for the comment mr appreciated i spent the day doing that
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